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Offline big red

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The Pick
« on: June 08, 2009, 05:48:18 PM »
You’re a d*mn, bloody stain
That can’t be brought to clear
A fine, precious souvenir of pain
A naked headline it hurts to hear

This sterling dross must want to purge
But an item once moved leaves a space
And so afeared my will won’t urge
Your tarnished spot from your place

No light smudge but a blaring blot
A still, hateful reminder of a thing
There’s a stink that goes with rot
Just as pain chases after the sting

A delicious wound marks the spot
The evicted denizen of a soul
Resides incessantly, dark in my thought
His life there demanding a toll

To be under this hostile dictate
To be immersed in delirious charm
Is to have carved a rusty date
Engraved and remembered a harm

A worn path, familiar and old
In every sense a trace
Deeply routed, immovable, bold
Like a trench cross a wizened face

A beautiful scar not to be healed
To fade would be to omit
To relinquish a time ever concealed
A soft shock refused to forget

We made a splendid cut
Together a terrific mistake
Taken on a violent tide of happy
Now I’m drowned in the wake

You’re  a vandal and a robber
A trespasser and a thief
You’re the center of my creation
And the bubbling, cool spring of my grief


So I’ll pick the scab and squeeze the blood
And never let the healing part come
For a new patch of skin and a lack of hurt
Would bring a forever numb

There’s a foggy footprint on the pad of my heart
Without the d*mn taint I can’t tell
The difference in the now and apart
And the darkest foul bottom of hell.


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Re: The Pick
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 07:54:04 PM »
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 I ride because it's the ultimate therapy for the human condition. Plus, I like to go fast.

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Re: The Pick
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 09:01:12 AM »
I'm thinkin I need to cut back on the country music.

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Re: The Pick
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 06:59:27 PM »
Wow, I haven't been a country fan for quite some time, but I sure don't remember any lyrics like that!

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Re: The Pick
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 08:45:23 PM »
Wow, I haven't been a country fan for quite some time, but I sure don't remember any lyrics like that!



Heck I thought that be be a dadburn Goth Rock song.

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Re: The Pick
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 09:37:13 PM »
You know this is funny, cause I am actually also working on a country song. LOL  Just tryin to figure out something to rhyme with "bottom feeder."   :roflmao:

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Re: The Pick
« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 09:17:18 AM »
You’re a d*mn, bloody stain
That can’t be brought to clear
A fine, precious souvenir of pain
A naked headline it hurts to hear

This sterling dross must want to purge
But an item once moved leaves a space
And so afeared my will won’t urge
Your tarnished spot from your place

No light smudge but a blaring blot
A still, hateful reminder of a thing
There’s a stink that goes with rot
Just as pain chases after the sting

A delicious wound marks the spot
The evicted denizen of a soul
Resides incessantly, dark in my thought
His life there demanding a toll

To be under this hostile dictate
To be immersed in delirious charm
Is to have carved a rusty date
Engraved and remembered a harm

A worn path, familiar and old
In every sense a trace
Deeply routed, immovable, bold
Like a trench cross a wizened face

A beautiful scar not to be healed
To fade would be to omit
To relinquish a time ever concealed
A soft shock refused to forget

We made a splendid cut
Together a terrific mistake
Taken on a violent tide of happy
Now I’m drowned in the wake

You’re  a vandal and a robber
A trespasser and a thief
You’re the center of my creation
And the bubbling, cool spring of my grief


So I’ll pick the scab and squeeze the blood
And never let the healing part come
For a new patch of skin and a lack of hurt
Would bring a forever numb

There’s a foggy footprint on the pad of my heart
Without the d*mn taint I can’t tell
The difference in the now and apart
And the darkest foul bottom of hell.


 *aac*  That's really good.  That is one that makes you think,   to me that always makes a great poem.  Fancy (my mom) would love that.  You are extremely talented.   :bananna:

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